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楼主 IP段一直有JP2009/4/7 23:16:00

是一篇演讲稿? 然后 明天就要演讲了? TAT

关于音乐考古的? 然后? 是中文? 用金山翻译了一下 感觉很多地方不对

有没有有闲+好心的JMS愿意帮帮忙?? 帮我这文盲看看并且纠正一下啊~~~~

跪谢!!!!!!

下面是那段英文+中文???? 有点小长

再次跪谢

Who are working together with the sun and the stars together to disperse the darkness of the night? I am proud of my people are archaeological music! No matter who they are seasons to go from the monotonous repetition of reincarnation? Who are facing fails to solve the world to explore the mysteries of the millennium? Who by virtue of the careful and patient recovery from the early life of the little fragment? Music people are archaeological, the most lovely music archeology people. Music archeology, people at the eyes of a mysterious and strange career. Archaeological institute of music, others feel as rich as are the means to explore and discover, it would be kind of resplendent or harvest. Only qualified personnel to do the music really understand archeology is not just a career, but also a duty, a kind of discovery and rescue of human responsibility for the sacred past. May be that not too many of the resplendent, but also do not have too much passion surging. However, when the exposed soil with various items to show in front of us gradually, when the scattered debris gradually splicing into their appearance was due, when a lonely spring and autumn harvest display at the world, I think I am the happy, happy unparalleled!

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I am proud of my people are archaeological music! Even though there is not much to praise and extol, flowers and applause, but still persistent, still guard the original archaeological most people, the duty of loyalty. As a music archeology did not too long, perhaps not too much accumulation of experience and knowledge, not subjected to too much suffering and frustration. However, more than a year or archaeological career with the more in-depth understanding. Year has been the most difficult heat and cold, but also has been the most difficult to endure the loneliness and loneliness, but more and more gains are pleasantly surprised with the passion, the education and refreshing feel, love the music archeology, from the moment the add effect. Because I know that the property left behind by the ancients for us today is how valuable and important work our people are not comparable with the great discovery of the history of exploration, we will also want to recover from a nation will be great past.

是谁与太阳一起工作与星星一起驱散夜色的黑暗?又是谁不论春夏秋冬地奔波在外重复着单调的轮回?是谁面朝黄土背朝天地探寻着千年未解的奥秘?又是谁凭借着认真和耐心复原起先民生活中的点滴片段?是考古人,最可的考古人。考古,一项在常人眼中神秘又陌生的职业。提起考古,别人总觉得是那样富有探索与发现的意味,亦或是会有那样的金碧辉煌的收获。只有做了考古人才真正理解它不仅仅是一种职业,更是一种责任,一种发现和拯救人类过去的神圣的责任。也许,并没有太多的金碧辉煌,也没有太多的激情澎湃。但是,当随着泥土的揭露,各种器物逐渐展现在眼前时,当零散的碎片逐渐的拼接成它们当年应有的面貌时,当一个寂寞春秋的收获展现在世人面前时,我想我是幸福的,无比的幸福!

??????? 我骄傲,我是考古人!尽管没有太多的赞美与歌颂,鲜花与掌声,但是依然执着,依然守护着考古人最原始、最忠诚的职责。作为一名考古人并没有太长的时间,或许并没有积累太多的经验与知识,没有经受太多的苦难与挫折。但是,一年多的时间里还是对考古这项职业有了更加深人的认识。一年中有过最难熬的酷暑与严寒,也有过最难忍受的孤独与寂寞,但是更多更多的是喜出望外的收获与激情、如沐春风的教育与感受,热考古,从加人的那一刻起。因为我知道古人遗留下来的财产对于今天的我们来说是何等的珍贵与重要,我们从事的工作是别人无法可比的伟大的发现与探索的历程,我们将要复原起的也将是一个民族伟大的过去。?

IP段一直有JP

新人过门

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2 = =2009/4/7 23:25:00

……你还不如别给那金山的翻译……

3 = =2009/4/7 23:32:00

金山翻的太恐怖了

你不是整篇考古的,怎么愣是出来music?我没读懂 = =||||||

4 LZ2009/4/7 23:36:00

是关于音乐考古的~~~~~~

再次跪求……TAT

5 今天刚出分2009/4/7 23:45:00

姑娘你是要在哪里演讲= =

我英语也不是很强,都看得出来这语法完全不通啊ORZ

6 跪求啊2009/4/7 23:46:00

TL加跪求

7 跪求啊2009/4/7 23:49:00

在学校演讲?? 5L~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~你们看中文就好了???? 因为英文是金山翻译的……

TAT 再次跪求……

8 - -2009/4/7 23:49:00

完全被金山弄囧了……

9 跪求啊2009/4/7 23:52:00

确实,我一文盲也觉得翻的不好

但是,实在要我翻译无能啊……

10 ==2009/4/8 0:04:00

LZ先把中文给顺顺,第一句不通啊。至少有个标点吧。

11 = =2009/4/8 0:12:00

Those who are working day after day to? eliminate the darkness at night, those who are busy running about archaeology,those who are exploring the long-lasting mysteris, those who are recovering the historical relics of lifes of ancient people with patience and seriousness, who are they? They are archaeologists. To normal people, archaeologist is a mysterious and unfamiliar career. When archaeology is mentioned, people usually think it consists of exploration and discovery and? great rewards are obtained. Only archaeologists can understand that archaeology is not a career to them but also a responsibilty. Perhaps, it dos not bring much wealth and? passion. However, when the deep soil is exposed,when different historical relics are shown ,bits and pieces are rebuilt to form the original one, the rewards of archaeologists are shown to the public. I think I am happy,absolutely.

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12 ubear2009/4/8 0:13:00

有JP,忍不住登陆上来

有2个问题:

1.LZ为什么一定需要用英文演讲?不能用中文吗?中文写得挺好的

2.如果一定要用英文,真心推荐一个最有效的办法-找个现实中英语系的朋友帮你翻译吧。

网络不是免费的.....中翻英,而且又是这样拗口的......

另外最友情提醒一下,如果一定要用英文演讲,这篇文章就算全部翻译好了也不符合英语演讲文的风格,开篇没有气势,后面花巧的话重复太多

表现不出对专业的激情。

再次真心建议找个英语系的朋友帮你从头到尾修修

文章好不好,不完全是句句翻译到位就是好的。要看是不是能表达你的情感,是不是能在那种语言文化下引起共鸣

ubear

新人过门

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13 隔壁楼的LZ2009/4/8 0:21:00

我试看看= =


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是谁跟太阳和星球一起工作,来消除夜晚的黑暗?

我对音乐考古的人感到自豪!

是谁无论是什么季节,都会离开一成不变、单调的生活轨道?

是谁去探索太平盛世的奥妙时屡经经历失败?

是谁即小心翼翼又耐心地去复苏以往人们的生活碎片?

音 乐人是考古式的,最惹人喜爱的音乐考古家。音乐考古,在人们眼中充满神秘与神奇的职业。音乐中的考古界,大家都觉得它是探索与发掘,就像个辉耀或充实的职 业。只有有资格去碰音乐的人才能真正了解考古不仅是个职业,但也是个责任,一种为了神圣的过往而去发掘并拯救(现在)人类(该负起)的责任。也许这职业并 不像常人所说的那么辉煌,也没有那么多的澎湃热情。但是,当那颓废的泥土地慢慢在我们面前浮现出数种东西、当残髅慢慢地结合变成他们原有的姿态、当一个寂 寞春季和秋季丰收出现在世间,我觉得我会很开心,无可比拟的开心!


我对音乐考古的人感到自豪!就算没有很多的赞美和歌颂、花朵和掌声,但依然持续地、依然守住原有的音乐考古风格,忠心的责任。作为一位音乐考古家并不用花 太长的时间,也许也不需要太多累计出来的经验和知识,不需要去受太多的苦难与挫折。话虽如此,超过一年的考古工作能让人持有更多的更深人的了解。就算很难 去忍受(这种职业的)一波接一波而来的孤独,但到最后能得到的收获是开心的惊喜外加热情、教育、新鲜感、对音乐考古的爱。因为我知道那些古代人留给今天的 我们的财产是多么地有价值和多么的重要。。。。。。


。。。。。。后面那两句,哪里copy回来的?感觉英文很有问题= =




14 = =2009/4/8 0:24:00

额。。。ls

这lz要的是中翻英。。。

英翻中的话XQer肯定很快帮她解决掉了……

15 老糊涂了2009/4/8 0:26:00

靠。。。。。。一 一凸



16 ubear2009/4/8 0:27:00

7 跪求啊2009-4-7 23:49:00

在学校演讲?? 5L~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~你们看中文就好了???? 因为英文是金山翻译的……

TAT 再次跪求……

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13L的JM U白忙活了,LZ要的是中译英

LZ请你好歹BT清楚一些

翻译也是是苦力活

ubear

新人过门

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文:76 分:460

17 老糊涂了2009/4/8 0:28:00

ubear2009-4-8 0:27:00

7 跪求啊2009-4-7 23:49:00

在学校演讲?? 5L~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~你们看中文就好了???? 因为英文是金山翻译的……

TAT 再次跪求……

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13L的JM U白忙活了,LZ要的是中译英

LZ请你好歹BT清楚一些

翻译也是是苦力活

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是我老糊涂= =



18 = =2009/4/8 0:33:00

是我老糊涂= =

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顺毛,虽然我占了2L

其实我也是读了一下金山那段发现狗屁不通才悟到原来LZ是要中翻英的。。。

我说中翻英干嘛要把英文放前面Orz

另外,LZ你这文绉绉的中文翻成英文绝对没效果……

19 ==2009/4/8 0:36:00

LZ你这文绉绉的中文翻成英文绝对没效果……
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+1
俺挺想尝试的。。。看了几行拜倒了

20 = =2009/4/8 0:41:00

LZ。。。你要中翻英是吗。。整个搞迷糊

21 = =2009/4/8 0:42:00

LZ你这文绉绉的中文翻成英文绝对没效果……
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+1
俺挺想尝试的。。。看了几行拜倒了
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中文演讲跟英文演讲基本上是两种风格…还来得及的话从头用英文写应该比较好?

22 ubear2009/4/8 0:53:00

一句话,太空洞,不如举点例子。既然有爱也有体验,应该能写出更加引人共鸣的文吧

ubear

新人过门

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文:76 分:460

23 2009/4/8 1:03:00

LZ你这文绉绉的中文翻成英文绝对没效果……
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+1
俺挺想尝试的。。。看了几行拜倒了
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+2
中文演讲跟英文演讲基本上是两种风格…还来得及的话从头用英文写应该比较好?
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+3
要不去网上搜搜

24 = =2009/4/8 1:26:00

祝lz好运
希望这楼里有英文作家
翻译其实和重写差不多,比重写更难

25 = =2009/4/8 3:14:00

谁能告诉我为什么金山翻译出来的东西里面会有一个music?

26 昵称2009/4/8 3:36:00

英文虽然也有华丽的,但其实以平实见长。特别是演讲,很生僻的词妨碍理解,没有必要。

历史上有名的演讲都是用平实的排比讲出气势的。

27 必填2009/4/8 6:13:00

LZ要的中翻英?
在加拿大念书,尽量帮翻了一下
有些地方最好还是找专业人士检查一遍

who are the people that work with the Sun and Stars to disperse the darkness of nights? who are the people that works outside no matter in what season, to experience the monotonous metempsychosis? Who are the people that face the ground with their back to the sky to search for the secret of time? Who are the people that discovers the lifestyle of the natives with so much patiences and compassion? The archeologist. They are the archeologist.Archeology, and mysterious and untouchable job to most people's eyes. Mentioning archeology, people relate that to the concept of discovery. Maybe it is not as adventurous, nor colorful, but as the digging goes further down, as all different kind of old dishes appears, as all the broken pieces get put together, as an acient time perioud gets shown to people, I think as an archeologist, I am happy, undescrible.

I am proud to be an archeologist! Even without much praise and admiration, without flowers or applauses, I still hold my deepest respect to my job. Though I have not been an archeologist for too long, have not saved enough experiences, or have not gone through so much difficulty, but what I have gained is the feeling of achievement and passion. I learned them since the first day I joined the team. I know how precious and important those acient pieces means to us, the job I'm doing is an uncomparalbe course, and what I'm discovering is the history of a nation and its people.

28 必填2009/4/8 6:15:00

错了一句~
Archeology, an mysterious and untouchable job to most people's eyes

29 nn2009/4/8 6:42:00

LZ这是演讲比赛呢还是一般的speech?

华而不实的词太多了, 英文根本没办法这样说话的.? 如果真的想说自己很爱这个职业, 就讲讲自己工作中经历过难忘或有趣的事情, 辛苦或困难. 平实很重要. 表喊口号, 一篇下来听众都没办法理解这到底是什么样的工作, 没法产生共鸣.

30 = =2009/4/8 6:56:00

如果中翻英 可能要连带改成英语的语气 不知可否

LZ的中文写的很文采= = 但英文可能表达风格和中文相差较大..

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31 --2009/4/8 15:17:00

LZ这是演讲比赛呢还是一般的speech?

华而不实的词太多了, 英文根本没办法这样说话的.? 如果真的想说自己很爱这个职业, 就讲讲自己工作中经历过难忘或有趣的事情, 辛苦或困难. 平实很重要. 表喊口号, 一篇下来听众都没办法理解这到底是什么样的工作, 没法产生共鸣.

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正解

完全米看出LZ对她的职业有爱

32 LZ2009/4/9 21:32:00

找了好久才找到这个贴~~~过来谢谢两位翻译的TX

那天很匆忙,就直接走了……

特此来谢谢!!!!!!!!!!!!

三鞠躬~~~~~

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