有没有英文好的JMS进来好心帮忙看下这段英文

LZ你这文绉绉的中文翻成英文绝对没效果……
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俺挺想尝试的。。。看了几行拜倒了
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中文演讲跟英文演讲基本上是两种风格…还来得及的话从头用英文写应该比较好?

一句话，太空洞，不如举点例子。既然有爱也有体验，应该能写出更加引人共鸣的文吧

LZ你这文绉绉的中文翻成英文绝对没效果……
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俺挺想尝试的。。。看了几行拜倒了
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中文演讲跟英文演讲基本上是两种风格…还来得及的话从头用英文写应该比较好?
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要不去网上搜搜

祝lz好运
希望这楼里有英文作家
翻译其实和重写差不多，比重写更难

谁能告诉我为什么金山翻译出来的东西里面会有一个music？

LZ要的中翻英？
在加拿大念书，尽量帮翻了一下
有些地方最好还是找专业人士检查一遍

who are the people that work with the Sun and Stars to disperse the darkness of nights? who are the people that works outside no matter in what season, to experience the monotonous metempsychosis? Who are the people that face the ground with their back to the sky to search for the secret of time? Who are the people that discovers the lifestyle of the natives with so much patiences and compassion? The archeologist. They are the archeologist.Archeology, and mysterious and untouchable job to most people's eyes. Mentioning archeology, people relate that to the concept of discovery. Maybe it is not as adventurous, nor colorful, but as the digging goes further down, as all different kind of old dishes appears, as all the broken pieces get put together, as an acient time perioud gets shown to people, I think as an archeologist, I am happy, undescrible.

I am proud to be an archeologist! Even without much praise and admiration, without flowers or applauses, I still hold my deepest respect to my job. Though I have not been an archeologist for too long, have not saved enough experiences, or have not gone through so much difficulty, but what I have gained is the feeling of achievement and passion. I learned them since the first day I joined the team. I know how precious and important those acient pieces means to us, the job I'm doing is an uncomparalbe course, and what I'm discovering is the history of a nation and its people.

错了一句~
Archeology, an mysterious and untouchable job to most people's eyes