21论文改N次发表于：2007/6/22 22:02:00
说句实在话。其实没什么大的语法错误。。
感觉纯粹为了凑字数。。这个东西老师要是看的不仔细，就这么交了吧。。
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学校就是RP到让英语老师看= =
不然我们专业的老师也没发现的
22白免免发表于：2007/6/22 22:07:00
让英文老师看。。你会死掉的比较惨的说。。。
你整理整理LS的。。。人家都快给你改一半了。。
23论文改N次发表于：2007/6/22 22:09:00
整理ing
谢谢各位的帮忙
24~发表于：2007/6/22 22:12:00
说句实在话。其实没什么大的语法错误。。
感觉纯粹为了凑字数。。这个东西老师要是看的不仔细，就这么交了吧。。
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学校就是RP到让英语老师看= =
不然我们专业的老师也没发现的
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你们学校英文老师还真有空啊，不过可能是老师手下的研究生看得
真可怜
25白免免发表于：2007/6/22 22:14:00
it can be a reference to others for the development of modern logistics.
26-发表于：2007/6/22 22:19:00
As the representation of the major ports in South China,
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To represent the major ports in South China, Guangzhou port must achieve sustainable development through the reform of modern port logistics.
revolution一般用于革命- -，改革用reform就行
27摘要太长了发表于：2007/6/22 22:20:00
真心觉得。
我专业的才及LZ一半，试着改短些，你好导师也好...=v=
28-发表于：2007/6/22 22:22:00
Compare with the international major port development, the development of port in
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Compare with the international ones, the ports in China is far behind in development.
29论文改N次发表于：2007/6/22 22:22:00
真心觉得。
我专业的才及LZ一半，试着改短些，你好导师也好...=v=
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字数有规定，改短了导师才不放过我= =
30……发表于：2007/6/22 22:34:00
31论文改N次发表于：2007/6/22 22:37:00
32-发表于：2007/6/22 22:38:00
By using the SWOT method, assay the strength, weakness, opportunity, treat. Then summarize the logistics development level disparity between
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Through using the SWOT method, the assay dig on four aspects, involving strengths, disadvantages, opportunities and challenges, to achieve a conclusion on the gap of the development betweenGuangzhou port and others. On the basis of the analysis, the assay also provide some suggetions on how to solve the present problems, promote the development, and be a available refereence for other ports to reform.
33-发表于：2007/6/22 22:41:00
然后，LZ你先整合一下列出来，我再继续，现在看着有点眼花了。
34论文改N次发表于：2007/6/22 22:42:00
谢谢LS~~~感激不尽
继续整理ING
35白免免发表于：2007/6/22 22:42:00
你先整理吧。。
我觉得把这些意见综合综合。。您那分数都上了不少了。。你整理整理了再说吧
36论文改N次发表于：2007/6/22 22:44:00
你先整理吧。。
我觉得把这些意见综合综合。。您那分数都上了不少了。。你整理整理了再说吧
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分数早一个月前就定了的= =
这个月改了N次都是迎评作的孽
不过还是谢谢大家
37-发表于：2007/6/22 22:45:00
我也不敢说高手，不过GRE考得还凑合，闲着也是闲着
一会儿说不定有专业高手
38不是高手发表于：2007/6/22 22:45:00
This article describes the condition of
就改了最后一段，前面的lz按样子改吧。主要是时态用词还有连贯上的问题。这两天光是在改MBA的文章了...实在懒得看完了。
39黑色君发表于：2007/6/22 22:52:00
楼主我帮你重新翻了一遍……大家的意见我也么看- -0，你自己综合下就好。
低血糖乱翻的，表介意。
第一段：
With the development of Chinese economy, the logistic demand in China has also experienced a rapid increase. Ports are major bearers of social logistics, especially inports and exports. Portal logistics can promote portal economy, and further promote regional economy, even on the national level. Therefore its role in the development of national economy has gained great significance by time. At present, many international large ports are developing into modern logistic ports. Compared with those large ports, the logistic development in our country has been lagging behand. Representing the large ports in South China, Guangzhou Port has to achieve sustainable development through reformation --- modern portal logisticalization. To realize this aim, the Guangzhou government plans to build the South China International Modern Logistics Center using Guangzhou as the major city.
40黑色君发表于：2007/6/22 22:53:00