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1楼主 论文改N次2007/6/22 20:52:00
月底就拿证了，但今天还被通知要改论文
说是英文摘要有语法错误，但凭我的四级水平实在只能写成这样= =
求英语高手JMS帮忙看下面的英文有啥语法错误，拜托了，鞠躬~！
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中文
随着中国经济的不断发展，物流需求也快速增长。港口是承担社会物流的主要场所，特别是进出口物流的主要载体。港口物流能够带动港口经济，进而带动区域经济、全国经济。因此它在国民经济发展中发挥着越来越重要的作用。目前，国际上许多大型港口都向现代化物流港口发展。与国际大型港口发展相比，我国港口的物流发展显得比较落后。作为我国华南地区大型港口代表,广州港必须通过现代港口物流化的改革，达到可持续发展。正因如此，广州便计划以广州港为主体，打造我国南方国际现代物流中心。
本文描述广州港物流状况，利用SWOT分析方法，从优势、劣势、机遇和威胁四方面进行分析，总结出广州港目前物流发展水平与其他港口的差距，并提出改善对策。从而在解决广州港存在的问题，促进其发展的同时，能够为其他港口的现代物流化发展提供一定的参考。
英文
With the economic development in
This article describe the condition of
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As the representation of the major ports in South China,
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To represent the major ports in South China, Guangzhou port must achieve sustainable development through the reform of modern port logistics.
revolution一般用于革命- -，改革用reform就行
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By using the SWOT method, assay the strength, weakness, opportunity, treat. Then summarize the logistics development level disparity between
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Through using the SWOT method, the assay dig on four aspects, involving strengths, disadvantages, opportunities and challenges, to achieve a conclusion on the gap of the development betweenGuangzhou port and others. On the basis of the analysis, the assay also provide some suggetions on how to solve the present problems, promote the development, and be a available refereence for other ports to reform.
38 不是高手2007/6/22 22:45:00
This article describes the condition of
就改了最后一段，前面的lz按样子改吧。主要是时态用词还有连贯上的问题。这两天光是在改MBA的文章了...实在懒得看完了。
39 黑色君2007/6/22 22:52:00
楼主我帮你重新翻了一遍……大家的意见我也么看- -0，你自己综合下就好。
低血糖乱翻的，表介意。
第一段：
With the development of Chinese economy, the logistic demand in China has also experienced a rapid increase. Ports are major bearers of social logistics, especially inports and exports. Portal logistics can promote portal economy, and further promote regional economy, even on the national level. Therefore its role in the development of national economy has gained great significance by time. At present, many international large ports are developing into modern logistic ports. Compared with those large ports, the logistic development in our country has been lagging behand. Representing the large ports in South China, Guangzhou Port has to achieve sustainable development through reformation --- modern portal logisticalization. To realize this aim, the Guangzhou government plans to build the South China International Modern Logistics Center using Guangzhou as the major city.
开始8CJ
41 白免免2007/6/22 22:54:00
With the development of Chinese economy, the logistic demand in China has also experienced a rapid increase. Ports are major bearers of social logistics, especially inports and exports. Portal logistics can promote portal economy, and further promote regional economy, even on the national level. Therefore its role in the development of national economy has gained great significance by time. At present, many international large ports are developing into modern logistic ports. Compared with those large ports, the logistic development in our country has been lagging behand. Representing the large ports in South China, Guangzhou Port has to achieve sustainable development through revolution of modern portal logisticalization. To realize this aim, the Guangzhou government plans to build the South China International Modern Logistics Center using Guangzhou as the major city.
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粉像样。见识就是6级的阅读啊！
开始8CJ
66 看热闹2007/6/23 0:04:00
Through using(introduing?) the SWOT method, the assay digs on four aspects involved in the SWOT method, involving strengths, disadvantages, opportunities and challenges,蓝色删掉 to achieve a conclusion on the gap of the development between Guangzhou port and others. On the basis of the analysis, the assay provides some policy suggetions on how to solve the present(current?) problems, promote the development, and be an available reformation refereence for to other ports to reform.
32L俺做了点小改动
新人过门
70 论文改N次2007/6/23 0:11:00
今晚的整合
With the development of Chinese economy, the logistic demand in
This issue shows that the condition of
76 被拖来瞅瞅……2007/6/23 0:25:00
therefore, the construction of a modern international logistic center in southern China based mainly on Guangzhou Port is also listed on the plan of the local government.
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赞！更强调那个物流中心更好。把based mainly on换成centring on怎么样？
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我的意思是以其为主体……就是with guangzhou port as main body，centring on 有点以其为中心，而不是以其为主体带动周边……我扯远了……这种论文意思差不多就成了……
另外logistics那个……我目前不能肯定，但是其他明显看着更像生造词orz
79 parody2007/6/23 0:31:00
Ｗith the development of economy， Ｃhina has witnessed an increasing demand for logistics．Port begins to act as a main place for social logistics, especially an support for import and export logistics. Port Logistics can not only advance port’s economy but also make pushes to both regional and national economy, So it begins to play a more and more important role in the development of national economy in China. At present, many big ports in the world have been in the process of changing themselves to modernizational ports. Compared to some big international ports, the development of ports in China still falls behind. Being the representitive of major ports in South China, Guangzhou port will achieve its sustainable development through reforming into a modernizational port characterized by logitics. Therefore, Guangzhou Municipal Government plans to build an internatioanl logitics center in South China basing on Guangzhou port.
By using the SWOT method to analyze four parts, including strengthes, weaknesses, opportunities, treats of Guangzhou Ports, this article describes the situation of logistics in Guangzhou Port. This article also sums up the gap in the development of logitics of guangzhou Port basing on that of other ports and offers some good suggestions in order to help Guangzhou Port develop, meanwhile making Guangzhou Port an reference to other ports for the development of modernizational logistics.
也试着翻译了下＝ ＝
没检查，好多小错．．．修改了下＝ ＝
parody于 2007-6-23 9:49:36 编辑过本文
新人过门
85 看热闹2007/6/23 2:01:00
With the boom of economy, China has witnessed an increasing demand of logitics．Therefore, ports begin to act as main places of social logistics, especially of import and export logistics. The Logistics of ports can not only advance their own economy but also accelerate the regional and national economy, so it gains a more and more significant role in the development of national economy in China. At present, many large-scale ports around the world are transforming themselves into modernizational ones. Compared to them, the development of ports in China has lagged behind seriously. For this reason, Guangzhou Port, representing the large ports in Southern China, has to attain to sustainable development through reformation --- modern port logisticalization. To realize this aim, the Guangzhou government plans to build the Southern China International Modern Logistics Center basing on Guangzhou Port.
Through introduing the SWOT method, the assay digs on four aspects, involving strengthes, weaknesses, opportunities, and treats, to achieve some conclusions pertaining to the gap between the logistic development of Guangzhou Port from that of others. Moreover, the assay provides the local government some available suggetions on how to promote the logistics development of Guangzhou port by solving the current problems facing and finally make it a qualified reformation refereence to other ports.
俺的最终整理结果，俺尽力了…………Orz
睡觉去！！！
新人过门
87 没有2011/7/21 11:58:00
I've came here for half a year . life here is very interesting . we got up early in the morning . after the breakfast , before classes begin , we often do some reading . we can now talk about the number of things with Engish . How happy i am!
We have four classes in the morning . We all study hardly . there are many other interesting activities . we often listen go out to factories , villages to learn the people.
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